Thursday, April 30, 2015

Soldier-Moment in Time

WALT: Use adjectives (describing words) to make our writing interesting to the reader.
We pretended we were a soldier in the war, using our senses to describe what it was like.

I saw...ginormous tanks blowing by rocket launchers and bombs
I heard...people dying by a blast from soldiers firing bullets
I felt...blood dripping down on my back sliding down on the stony dirt ground
I wondered...if I could survive living in the war